Thursday, February 14, 2008

strenghts:
i am good at staying on the topic
i have good thesis statements
i have a lot of information
i write good body paragraphs

weakness:
i need to have longer conclusion paragraphs
i need to stop using my on opinions
i need to go more in depth in my analysis
i need to start spliting my paragraphs up instead of having one long one

to imoprove my writing i will read into the proper way of introducing and conclude paragraph. i will start trying to write more paragraphs. in my intro i will establish context better.

Saturday, February 2, 2008

Knowledge is something that you know

Truth is something that can be proven that it is right

Belief is something that you believe is right or wrong or how you feel

Knowledge is what you know that it is true. Knowledge is nothing that you believe that is not true. Truth is all knowledge and is only belief that is true. Belief is everything that you believe even if it is not true.