strenghts:
i am good at staying on the topic
i have good thesis statements
i have a lot of information
i write good body paragraphs

weakness:
i need to have longer conclusion paragraphs
i need to stop using my on opinions
i need to go more in depth in my analysis
i need to start spliting my paragraphs up instead of having one long one

to imoprove my writing i will read into the proper way of introducing and conclude paragraph. i will start trying to write more paragraphs. in my intro i will establish context better.